Monday, November 8, 2010

Sour Worm poems with similes

Sour worms:
They look like an elastic band dusted
with snow like a mountain top.
They smell like lemon and orange,
like a flower in the garden.
They taste like an explosion
of sugar and sourness
that makes me scream.
By Isabel W
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6 comments:

  1. AnonymousNovember 8, 2010 at 2:32 PM

    This is fantastic piece of writing Isabel. Keep up the great work. Nicki

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  2. AnonymousNovember 8, 2010 at 4:06 PM

    This is so awsome isabel!!!Keep it up:) Emma E-team

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  3. AnonymousNovember 10, 2010 at 9:56 AM

    Wow Isabel thats a great poem and You put lots of effort into it.
    You HAve used lots of similies in your poem well done.
    Tessa From the E-Team

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  4. AnonymousNovember 18, 2010 at 7:46 AM

    This is fantastic Isabel!!! Keep it up.
    Maddy E-Team

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  5. AnonymousNovember 18, 2010 at 9:27 AM

    Well done Isabel,It is a great poem.Keep up the good work.

    Chrissy E-Team

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  6. AnonymousNovember 18, 2010 at 9:42 AM

    This is a fantastic piece of writing Isabel. Great work using descriptive words. Jesse the E-team!

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