Monday, November 8, 2010

Sour Worm poems with similes


Look like snow flakes, crystal clear
sitting on top of a mountain ridge
like they are waiting for the
next snow fall to come.
Smell like freshly picked apples
straight off the tree
for cooking up for apple sauce.
Taste like a spicy gooeyness
sticking to my teeth
exploding like a kicking horse
in a starting box.
By Tessa E Room 5 Year 6

1 comment:

  1. Tessa I love your poem,it makes my mouth water.
    I love your descriptive words well done. Jesse the E-team!

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