Monday, November 8, 2010

Sour Worm poems with similes

Sour Worms Poem!

Sour worms are yummy,
They look sugary, colourful,
and ridged like a mountain.
If you smell a sour worm it smells weird.
It is sweet and it catches your breath.

If you eat a sour worm it tastes like this.
It makes you have dry lips sometimes.
It is like you have an explosion in your mouth.
It is like smooth Jelly.
Esther S

1 comment:

  1. Hi Esther great poem,I like how you added heaps of descriptive words.Well done Jesse the E-team!


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