Tuesday, May 10, 2011

Rail Trail Ride

We started off steady and fast. The sun was bright in the sky. 
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  1. AnonymousMay 17, 2011 at 6:56 PM

    This was a really good poem and I liked how you used more then 1 photo.
    I liked how you described about how hard it was to bike 22 Kilometres.
    I liked how you used nice big letters so that it catches everyones attention

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  2. AnonymousMay 23, 2011 at 3:43 PM

    I am very impressed with the poem girls. I'm not sure if my little legs could bike that far. Great descriptive language. The word exhausted and churning makes me feel very tired. Miss S

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